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Wednesday, June 1, 2011

Adding Detail To Sentences

Room 13 have been learning how to write a GREAT story by adding detail to sentences. Here is some of me and my partners work.

The inventor invented a spaceship.
Who invented the spaceship.
The monkey gathered the tools to invent a spaceship.

The inventor invented a spaceship to go to the moon.
Who invented the spaceship? The monkey called Kashya.
The monkey gathered the tools to invent a spaceship to help him turn the moon into a shape.