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Tuesday, November 15, 2011

One Tree Hill


Running down the hill the wind blew my hair. Soon I reached the bottom. “Yay I made it” I shouted as I avoided the rocks and poo! Tumbling and giggling, all my friends came rolling down. Would my friends land on rocks? Slowly walking away to the Stardome. Hooray!!!

2 comments:

  1. Hi Shya,

    I think you story was amazing. I love how you used heaps of cool topic words. Did your friends land on rocks?

    Well Keep it up!!

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  2. your stories are just getting better and better :) it was a fun day at One tree hill and the stardome

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