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Monday, May 23, 2011

The Pools


Diving into the pool I chocked on a lung full of water. Floating like a starfish, I noticed that my eyes were red. So I blinked away the burn.
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  1. saronaMay 25, 2011 at 9:10 AM

    hi kashy i realy like your story about swimming it is so intrising to read did you go swimming with your class room.

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  2. raeleenMay 25, 2011 at 9:11 AM

    Hi Kishya i really like your story about swimming.

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  3. RaufMay 25, 2011 at 9:13 AM

    I like the vocabulary that you used like a lung full of water.When I went swimming my eyes were burning to.

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  4. AshleeMay 25, 2011 at 9:17 AM

    Hi Kashya
    I liked your story you used some interesting vocab.and I wasn't falling asleep at all well it was kind of short but I still enjoyed it.A comment to help you on your animation is that your timing was a little bit slow but your drawing was cool.
    From Ashlee

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  5. Jeffrey WatsonMarch 9, 2020 at 10:02 PM

    Excellent article. Very interesting to read. I really love to read such a nice article. Thanks! keep rocking. tandem touring kayak

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